Is This Cool or Weird?

Okay, I loved the mid-80s TV movie version of Alice in Wonderland, which, of course, prominently featured "The Jabberwocky."

I also like filk music, at least older stuff (classics like Julia Ecklar's stuff, Leslie Fish...that kind of stuff).

This sounds like a filk recording of "The Jabberwocky," but I'm not sure if it's cool or not.  Something about the phrasing or pacing, especially at the beginning, seems a
bit...off:

Personally, my favorite nonsense phrase was always: "the vorpal blade went snicker-snack."